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Boys or Flowers, Love or Pride? - Chapter 1

  • May. 12th, 2007 at 3:10 PM
kame-shy
“Atrocious.” Kazuya thought to himself as he saw the boy next to him showed off his new diamond studded Rolex watch to his classmates.
 
“Unbelievable” He turned around and saw another person walking in with a new designer school bag that had little shiny gems embedded on the handle. Since when did they even make designer school bags?
 
“Preposterous” the word echoed in his mind again and again when he saw another guy flipped the latest mobile phone that had his name carved in gold over it.
 
Kazuya definitely was lucky to be in the most prestigious boy’s school for the elite in Japan, Hanatoko Academy. The sad fact for him is that the amount of money any of his classmates spend in a day could probably cover his family’s expenses for a week. Unlike his friends, he did not have the ability to splurge on anything, especially when his parents were trying so hard to make ends meet. It hurts when he recalled how his younger brother, Yuya, told him that he would strive to enter the cheapest public high school in Japan so that he could continue studying in this cursed institution.
 
“Red note! Red note! Kiritani Hiroto from Year 2 Class B received a red note!!” a loud voice stirred up a commotion among his classmates and woke Kazuya up from his thoughts. Yoshino-sensei who was lecturing about classroom etiquette suddenly announced the end of the class and left the classroom in a flustered manner. The students got up on cue, and started to head for the cafeteria where they knew a show of terror and bullying will take place.
 
“ Not the stupid red note again!” Kazuya thought to himself, putting his head on the table, not following his classmates out of the classroom. He loathed that stupid ‘tradition’ of bullying someone who had been ‘tagged’ by those obnoxious brats who think that they own the academy.
 
“ Kamenashi-san?” a new student stared at Kazuya curiously, “ What’s a red note? Why is everyone so excited about it?”
 
“Ah… a transfer student.” Kazuya muttered as he got up from his seat, “ Let’s just say… after you know about the disgusting culture of this academy, you will regret your decision of ever coming here…”
 
“The red note is a declaration of war from F4.” Kazuya explained as the new student fell into step with him as they followed the crowds which gathered in the cafeteria.
 
“F4?” the new student asked.
 
“Flower 4, abbreviated as F4.” Kazuya explained, “They are four guys that come from four very powerful and rich families.”
 
“Aren’t everyone rich and powerful in this academy?” the student asked again.
 
Kazuya felt a brief sense of dissatisfaction when he heard that comment, but he went on with his explanation. “ But the academy receives lots of contribution from this four families. These guys have been promised absolute power and freedom during their time here.”
 
“Wow, who are they?” came another question as they approached the cafeteria.
 
“I’ll just show you when they show up,” Kazuya said as they found a quiet spot to observe the huge rave happening at the cafeteria. The victim, Kiritani Hiroto sprawled on the floor of the cafeteria as the crowd jeered at him and pelted him with random objects they could get their hands on.
 
“It’s F4!!!” Someone announced as the crowd cheered and welcomed the four guys into the cafeteria.
 
“ F4 F4 F4…” the ceremonial chanting began as four distinctive guys came in, dressed in the latest treads, not looking one bit like a high school student.
 
“ That guy over there, is Ohno Satoshi,” Kazuya pointed at one of the members of F4, “ He’s a well known playboy according to some of the seniors but he does not commit himself to a relationship for some reason. Oh, and that, is Takizawa Hideaki, the one who goes for anyone at least five years older than himself. Apparently, rumours are that his family is behind the largest organized crime organization in the whole of Japan.”
 
The new student stood next to them, in awe of the four guys that entered the room.
 
“ The one with the brown hair is Yamashita Tomohisa,” Kazuya pointed out to his new found friend, “ He’s the quietest of the lot and no one really knows him well.”
 
“And the last one…?”
 
“Last but definitely not the least, is the self-proclaimed leader of F4, the heir to the most prominent and economically powerful Akanishi Corporation,” Kazuya tried hard to to grind his teeth as he said the last name, “ Akanishi Jin.”
 
The crowd cheered again when the four guys took their place in the center of the crowd. Akanishi sat down comfortably on one of the chairs as he looked down at Kiritani Hiroto, who could barely stand up and had bruises all over his arms.
 
“You,” Akanishi commanded as he pointed out a boy from the crowd, “ Beat him up.”
 
The frail boy panicked and shook his head furiously. Smirking, Akanishi stood up and walked towards the boy on the floor. Suddenly, he gave the boy on the floor a hard kick in the shins, making the poor boy yelp in pain. Bending down to mock at his victim, Akanishi Jin shoved the almost lifeless body over. “Pathetic” he scoffed under his breath. Then, he turned to the frail boy that he randomly picked out from the crowd.
 
“Why didn’t you obey me?” Jin asked, a threatening tone making the boy shake even more violently.
 
“I-I..” before the boy could reply, a flying fist hit him hard on his cheeks as his glasses flew across the cafeteria.
 
“ Ah… Jin is really angry today.” Takizawa commented to the other two members of F4 that were merely watching the show. Ohno merely looked back at Takizawa and nodded while Yamashita suddenly walked away from the two and left the crowd without a word. Kazuya looked curiously at this queer member of the group as Jin continued to bully the poor boy. Very soon, Akanishi got tired of beating the boy up and left the cafeteria, Ohno and Takizawa tagging behind him. The crowd soon dispersed and Kazuya proceeded to return to his class, together with his new found friend.
 
“Oh, I forgot to ask for your name. Hajimemashite, I’m Kamenashi Kazuya.”
 
The new boy smiled back at him and replied, “ Hi, I’m Nishikido Ryo.”
 
 
Audition Omake: ( My pathetic attempt at crack )
 
Author: And the role of Tsukushi shall fall on Kamenashi Kazuya!
 
Kame: Why am I always the girl? Can’t I switch roles with Jin? *pouts*
 
Author: ( wants badly to hug Kame but held back ) B-But the role of Domiyouji fits Jin to a T! He’s a brat… and very much of a baka at that… he IS known as Bakanishi…
 
Jin: Oi! What are you talking about! *glares*
 
Kame: Ne… ( wrapping his hands around Jin’s neck ) it’s alright Jin… at the very least, we can be lovers on screen…
 
Jin: And off screens…*leans closer and closer* 

Kame: *girly giggles*
 
Author: Hmph!
 
[info]madguitaristz stomps off because she was being ignored and she feels awkward watching live Akame action unfolding in front of her. ( But she did remember to install a hidden camera... somewhere. )

End of omake

Author's note:  I present to you... Hana Yori Dango ( if it was done with a full JE cast ). I hope this thing works. I just had an idea that I can integrate these JE boys characters into the HanaDan characters. If this sucks and you think it is totally gross and is an insult to Hana Yori Dango, let me know. I'll try not to cry and remove this post. (T_T) So... let me know your honest opinion. Do you think this will work out? Please comment and let me know. If it's not good, then I'll drop this multichap... thanks!! Sorry for the long note... oh. Credits to [info]rindiggfeltfor the interesting title.

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[info]gothicauthor wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 07:58 am (UTC)
[DIES LAUGHING] I think it's hilarious! And it really kind of works out, doesn't it? o.O Jin going to LA and Domyouji going to New York, etc. etc. I don't think Jin's quite as violent, but they really are similar. T.T

Awwww... Ryo as Sakurako... XD XD XD

Gothic Author
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 10:25 am (UTC)
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>.<I'm so mighty glad people like this fic! Really! I thought some people might be against the idea of parodying the drama... >.< thanks for the comment! Jin do make a good domiyouji doesnt it. haha.
(no subject) - [info]gothicauthor - May. 13th, 2007 02:54 am (UTC)
[info]coquetish wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 08:04 am (UTC)
Since I loooooove HYD, I think this will be a fun read. Please continue.

And also, I love the fact that Jin is in Domuyouji's position. *o* <3
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 10:26 am (UTC)
LOL. Seem like u share my sentiments. I wanted to write a fic where Jin is rich but still has his bakanishi characteristics... and Domiyouji appeared in my mind! haha. Thanks! I'll continue!
[info]didikoishi wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 08:13 am (UTC)
Erai!
You are a genius!
Pi as Hanazawa Ruy *o* Cool! Though I'll suffer again for his unrequited love... T^T but, at least, I will enjoy all the PiKame moments ^.~
Please try to update soon, I'm so eager to read more!! *hugs*
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 10:27 am (UTC)
HAHA. Sure you will love the pikame version. it's princey pi again. I thought pi fit the character because the real pi is really kinda quiet... rite? :D thanks for the comment!
(no subject) - [info]didikoishi - May. 12th, 2007 12:07 pm (UTC)
[info]marilena_r wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 08:20 am (UTC)
It's a nice idea! And I don't think it is insulting to HYD. Plus, your choice of characters is perfect! Can't wait to see what role Tat-chan will have!
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 10:30 am (UTC)
Tat-chan ne... will come in later. :D haha. keep ur eyes open for him! I can't say my casting is perfect.. lol. I wanted to cast tat-chan as akira... but.. I have other plans at hand. :D stay tuned!
[info]sumomo_yuki wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 08:54 am (UTC)
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~~ hahahaha was waiting for someone to make this into A Je fic! hahaha yayyyyyyy~~ so far so good! and why is ryo sounding so timid? lol
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 10:28 am (UTC)
Hmm. because sakurako started off as a very very timid girl too... right? In fact I am thinking of who to cast as the 3 bitchy girls... have to think of those who can pass off as openly gay. >.< hard ne..
(no subject) - [info]sumomo_yuki - May. 14th, 2007 02:07 pm (UTC)
[info]cabernet_shiraz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 09:25 am (UTC)
Hahaha! Nice idea! I thought that F4 was gonna be T-TU or something...great that you included other JE people as well. ^__^

And Ryo? :D Curious how he will play the role...XD
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 10:32 am (UTC)
Haha. I thought through Ryo's role.. he'd be perfect for that role.. really. well.. I do wanna widen my range... HYD has a really huge cast of characters... I hope I wun bring in non JE pple when I run out of names to use. >.<
[info]hanez wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 09:37 am (UTC)
Oooooh no no, don't ever drop this multi-chapter fic, mabel dear!!!!! It's a fresh idea to write something based on a drama. A parody of Hanadan by the hot JE actors??? How cool is that????? *sorry for abusing the 'question marks'* xPPPP

I'm beginning to love this fic! Kame acts as Tsukushi! Jin as Domyouji totally fits his character!! Totally suits him!!~~~

And your audition omake is just ... love. Haha, so funny. You write amazing crack!! ^.~

*HUGGLES YOU*
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 10:34 am (UTC)
Yay! Really?! *GLOMPS*

You're too nice. :D And I do agree Jin is a total Domiyouji... >.< No wonder he n MatsuJun dun mix well... LOL.

Thanks! For you, and the rest who wants a continuation, I'll work hard to bring you more! Thanks! ♥♥♥♥♥!!!
[info]winairain wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 09:55 am (UTC)
:333 that was gooood~! I love the idea of HYD being set in an all-boys school. Pi would definitely fit Rui Hanazawa. Finding out that Ryo was gonna be Sakurako made me fall off my chair. xDDDD

I can't wait to find out who the other characters are gonna be.
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 10:36 am (UTC)
Like I said.. Ryo totally fits the bill to be Sakurako... really. haha. as the story goes.. you will realise. :D I'll bring in the other characters slowly.. You'll see...
[info]allopatric wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 10:11 am (UTC)
I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEE OH PLEASE CONTINUE \:D/

I laughed at the Nishikido part...Lmao
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 10:36 am (UTC)
OK! I will! thanks for your comment!! :D
[info]cream_rose wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 10:15 am (UTC)
Haaa?.. what are you talking about.. this story is gonna be fabulous! Been waiting for someone to write a HYD with the JE boys in it :)... and this opening is already cool!... so keep on writing ne =)
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 10:37 am (UTC)
Really? Yay! ok! then I shall keep writing!! :D I'll try my very best to parody this drama! :D
[info]kr_kill wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 11:19 am (UTC)
first time commenting you XD!

omg...i was waiting for someone to write this! when i was watching hana yori dango i was thinking of writing almost the same thing; kame being tsukushi and jin being domyouji though the rest of the characters are different..i was really surprised you used ryo as the new student..but i think yours is way better than i drafted on (and i didn't get to finish it so i'll just scratch the idea or change it..cause i wasn't really gonna follow the whole plot) do continue!

add-ing you in my friends list...if its okay ^_^;;;
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 02:02 pm (UTC)
sure it's alright. I'll add u back in a while. :D

Mine is nt exactly perfectly drafted. But it'll get along .. I guess..

thanks for the comment!
[info]haruhi_hikaru wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 11:28 am (UTC)
Woah, you just made my day!! <33333333333
HYD + JE boys = perfect fic!
Ur audition omake is hilarious too~
Make sure you share the result of ur hidden camera to everyone *evil grin*
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 02:15 pm (UTC)
>.< I wished.. But I think Koki stole the footage to write 'Make U Wet'.

HAHA. I'll try my best to bring you the best Parody I can... :D thanks for the comment!! ♥!!
[info]purple_sorrow wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 12:05 pm (UTC)
I like it ^______________^
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 02:16 pm (UTC)
yay! thanks!!! :D
[info]rindiggfelt wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 12:32 pm (UTC)
MABEL DEAR!!!~ ♥ This is hilarious XDDD I didn't actually finish watching HYD, so I really don't know anything much about the characters save for the four guys and Tsukushi :P But Kame as Tsukushi = perfect XD

And I got credited :D:D:D:D *loves on you*
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 02:24 pm (UTC)
I'll be very very happy if u find time to read on! haha. >.< then you will only know the version of HYD that I bring to you! >.<

haha. Of course you have to be credited. the title was cool! ♥♥♥♥!!!
[info]mage_of_time wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 12:56 pm (UTC)
*dies*

Oh, god. Just... You win.
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 02:24 pm (UTC)
wow. short comment. But i like! thanks!! :D
[info]purebloodqueen wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 01:24 pm (UTC)
I. I. I THINK I LOVE YOU. XDDDDD

I laughed out really loud when I read that Ryo's the new student. XD Ou gad. Sakurako's a psycho anyway. It fits. Pscyho!Ryo. =))

I love this already. ♥
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 02:25 pm (UTC)
haha. >.< good!! yay! thanks for liking this and thanks thanks thanks for commenting!! :D Stay tuned for more! :D
[info]vani13 wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 01:31 pm (UTC)
yay~ :D
I love HYD so I guess I'll love this too <33
But Tsukushi!Kame will fall for Rui!Yamapi and then Domyoji!JinJin will get jealous and ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

And like I said, Ryo fits the roll so well XD
I want to know how this goes on~ >___
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 02:27 pm (UTC)
I'll try my best yea... and not give away too much to you or it'll ruin the fun! haha. Ryo fits the role too well. >.< haha.

Stay tuned! though I know you would. *hugs*
[info]rmatsom wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 02:04 pm (UTC)
love this fic so much....please continue the fic...HYD is my favourite manga, anime n dorama...i think this will be my favourite fanfic too...huhuhu
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 02:26 pm (UTC)
Really?!?! Then I really have to work hard and write a good fic then! :D I'll try not to disappoint you!! :D thanks for the comment!
[info]lunarimis wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 03:24 pm (UTC)
yay1I always wanted to see story as a JE Fanfic!Update soon!
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 04:01 pm (UTC)
Ok! I'll try to.. have to rewatch bits n pieces of the drama as I write.. so I won't forget certain details. >.< haha. I'll try to update soon! thanks for reading!
[info]kusashipi wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 03:28 pm (UTC)
Woaaa LOVE ^^- Hana Yori Dango-Kame version!! XD
GAAH! ^^- I´m making a fanfic that are like Hana Yori Dango too ^^ Only that I have change some detail ^^
Pity my fanfics are in swedish XD Are not so good in english (Suck at it O.o)

But really love your fanfics ^^ update soon naa ^^
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 04:02 pm (UTC)
ooh. thanks! I'll try my best to update! I am trying to kill myself with three multichaps here. >.< haha.But I will work hard! write hard! :D
[info]atobekazuki wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 03:37 pm (UTC)
::laughs:: This is amazing! It fits too, Jin - LA, Domyouji - NY...even Yamapi's real attitude is like Rui >.< Ryo as Sakurako, though.....that's going to be interesting to watch unfold! I was wondering too XD how HYD would be in JE style.

Jin does fit Domyouji's character though....I love the "Audtion Omake" It made me laugh. Please update soon! I can't wait!
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 04:04 pm (UTC)
Ok! I'll try very hard to do an update soon! thanks for reading! stay tuned! ♥ !
[info]n33r0d wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 04:15 pm (UTC)
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because pi is hanazawa......... can you alter the ending, diff from hyd? :P not many ppl will object :D
[info]quinnsan wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 04:45 pm (UTC)
Now that was great. It really helps that I've seen HYD and I cannot wait for further chapters of this! ^^
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 13th, 2007 05:20 am (UTC)
:D I hope you will enjoy this fic... I'll try to follow the storyline.. and integrate the guy's characters into it.:D I'll try my best!!
[info]joshtin_22 wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 07:02 pm (UTC)
woahhhh...........nice idea u got there!!! i love it!! 1st time reading ur fic...hehehe....

jin as domyoji...kinda fits him...and pi and as rui...cool!!! haahaa....
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 13th, 2007 05:21 am (UTC)
First time? Yay! New reader! haha. Try my fics out... to get the hang of my style.. though my style changes too.. ok. nvm.Hope you'll enjoy my fics as it goes along. :D thanks for the comment!
[info]silecet wrote:
May. 12th, 2007 08:15 pm (UTC)
It's going to be sooo much fun^^ I love the idea of Pi as Hanazawa Ruy
And Ryo as.... psycho girl? (can't remember her name gomen)I can't wait to read the next chapter! xD
[info]madguitaristz wrote:
May. 13th, 2007 05:22 am (UTC)
haha. psychogirl= sakurako...

:D thanks for the comment! I'll work hard to bring you a good nxt chapter! :D
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